Goodnight (Song) Poem by annie tuck

Goodnight (Song)

Rating: 3.0


(Ah~)

In the morning I woke up, to gaze over at you
I had happened to notice
But hanging there at the side of the bed
Your pillow had slipped away
sadness sounds in my ears

In the morning I woke up and slipped out of my bed
In the mirror I resolved, that girls should try to get up earlier
To spend longer, getting ready, for the day to start again
I denied what I felt deep inside my heart
I was too embarrassed to admit you changed me since we had met
You can continue sleeping: I love you, I love you
I'll be sure to wake you up
Continue to dream
Good night, my love

(Hey~)

In the morning I woke up and slipped out of my bed
In the mirror I resolved, that girls should try to get up earlier
To spend longer, getting ready, for the day to start again
I denied what I felt deep inside my heart
I was too embarrassed to admit you changed me since we had met
You can continue sleeping: I love you, I love you
I'll be sure to wake you up
Continue to dream
Good night, my love

(HEY~)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 12 May 2009

I like the 'continue to dream good night, my love' part. But other than that it was more like a story in the way it was written. I didn't like it as much as the others. But I can see the quality in which you write.

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