Graceful Granny Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Graceful Granny

Rating: 5.0


A tweet was heard in the gardens of skies,
The tweeter cheated the wardens of skies,
Waves of His tweet were pasted on the clouds,
Moon wrapped it in the light of shrouds,
Stars decorated its lovely ear rings,
Venus made the tweet mandolin's strings,
Rainbow then brought a colorful dress,
Winds favored with a shining press,
White hairs were dyed by aurora sprays,
Paradise roses for the lips in decays,
Around its neck was the Milky Way,
And then it was turned in lovely clay.

The sun smiled and gave her wings,
Decorated her fingers with bright golden rings,
In the cover of pleasant lovely showers,
Spreading fragrance of heavenly flowers,
Down came on earth like a nascent bride,
With all the gems of the nature's tide,
On the earth were standing grandchildren,
She protected the chicks like a white feathered hen.

Monday, October 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: grandmother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beauty of a Granny and her protecting love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 27 October 2014

Beautiful poem that added beauty to Granny. Fantastic lines...... On the earth were standing grandchildren, She protected the chicks like a white feathered hen. When a woman is mother, she is strict and by the time she becomes Granny, she is no longer strict, in fact they support the grandchildren even for their mischief. Loved reading it.

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Bisma Mirza 27 October 2014

i love my Granny.. [3 she is my entire WoRLD and Everything... My bestest Friend :) .. poem is Loved: * [3

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Khalid Saifullah 19 November 2015

A graceful granny is a gift of God for the grandchildren............................10

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Salini Nair 29 October 2014

great work.....from a single nanny to a great poetrm....great...great

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Hazel Durham 28 October 2014

Amazing imagery with such beautiful lines that are so moving!

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Valsa George 28 October 2014

Venus made the tweet mandolin's strings, Rainbow then brought a colorful dress, Winds favored with a shining press, White hairs were dyed by aurora sprays, The poem abounds in beautiful images! Love this granny and her protecting love!

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 October 2014

I was amazed by the beauty of this sweet poem.

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