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Elisha De La Rosa

(2/10/95 / Houston, Texas)

Grand Finale


Going the distance is not enough
I'll go further as an over achiever
I'll go alone, because the pressure is tough
Im going down as my own believer

Prepare for the unexpected
I have not just crossed the finish line
Create new comments I am now repented.
I left a past behind

Rejuvenate the life that I had
Estimate my mistakes That clouded the sunshine
Pay back all the bills I didn't complete as a good man
Project my future I found a loaded carbine

Do I end it all tonight
This guilt which had created a wall between freedom and redemption
A piece of lead can break this wall down, it's my right
End myself for your protection

My grand finale
It's haste structure
The fast melody
Of a click of the trigger

2/21/11

Submitted: Saturday, September 22, 2012
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