Grandparents Poem by Saba Sheikh

Grandparents

Rating: 3.5


I am 91/81/71
And having fun
I live on pension
And have no tension
My hair are grey
And my only job is to pray
My sons serve me
My grandsons preserve me
But there is one sorrow in my head
That I have slow walk and step
Because now I am not a man
I am the father of a man

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Unwritten Soul 21 January 2012

Yes Neetham a nice rhyme from saba, good ideas too...creative, dont stop writing it awesome poem even in short! _Unwritten Soul

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Neetha Sasidharan 21 January 2012

wow.. grt poem nice rhymes.... i'm d father of a man.... i liked dat line.. keep writing..

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