Gravity Poem by Mehreen Mujeeb

Gravity

Rating: 5.0


She falls
Like a mountain slipping from the sea
She’s desolate
Yet she believes.

Her belief
Pulls her like gravity
It gives her patience
For something she cannot see.

Her heart follows the arrows it feels
She does
She goes
Wherever it takes her.

She waits for the day
The day she will see
Who wiped her tears
Since she learned how to weep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

fine wording indeed! ....10+

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Akram Saqib 05 June 2009

good use of a science term and knowledge

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Simran Sanganeria 04 June 2009

hey mehreen, good work as always.....: -)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Nice, melodious, touchy and lovely. Last conclusive stanza is beautiful.

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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