Gray Poem by Steaua Fara Nume Adriana

Gray

Rating: 5.0


it is raining gray
in this gray afternoon
small drops are falling
like a gray water sheet
over my old gray street

and my soul is gray
since my green oasis
was snatched away

then I sit here
staring the gray window
waiting for a warmer color
but that never comes

then I fall asleep
on my black keyboard
having gray dreams
of one more gray tomorrow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

Nice poem greys okay just don't let it becaome black I think writing helps us avoid that 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 10 September 2009

then I fall asleep on my black keyboard having gray dreams of one more gray tomorrow............................wonderful write over the rune of dream, quite ingenious,10++, thanks for sharing

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Jaideep Garg 09 September 2009

lovely poem mam..indeed.....+10

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Harold K Schreiberg 09 September 2009

Lovely descriptions in this short poem within and without Just remember that poetry is a key to another dimension the gateway to Wonderland

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Hazem Al Jaber 09 September 2009

beautiful nicely one.. just wondering if you meant gray not grey.. keep on dear sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2009

very well written poem, lovely to read............10

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