Great Show Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Great Show



Two giants have met
To state
And show
The peace chance must grow

World needs
Sans greed
No land grabs
No more backs tabs

Open diplomacy
With transparency
To adhere to principles
Not to create problems

Country must benefit
And feel fit
To compete in filed
And earn rich yield

India has moved
China has removed
Some misunderstanding
World may benefit out of trading

Thursday, September 18, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

Two giants have met To state And show The peace chance must grow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2014

Very well done. Let's do things for the better of the country then things for our own self. Stop the greed for the better of us all. Such a clear read for me. I loved it. 4 hours ago by Robert Lawrence Davenport | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2014

This is a nice poem to awaken the senses! I really liked it. 4 hours ago by Electric Peace | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

makes me think Mr. Awesome35 minutes ago Makes me think deeply and philosophize a bit. The fact that the first stanza's lines are very short was sort of uninteresting, though. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

interesting... Megha A36 minutes ago Economy & politics, well said!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2014

San Palad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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