Greedy Eyes Poem by Chris Harris

Greedy Eyes

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Some of the greatest things in life are very seldom seen,

This is why we close our eyes when we kiss or cry or dream.

This statement has a lot of truth and i believed it well,

But after seeing your caring face i really cannot tell.

Because every single second spent knowing you i need

To keep my eyes wide open, almost seemed with greed.

Your radience is overwhelming and I'm completely drawn

To me you are perfection without you i am torn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gutter Box 23 November 2008

Lovely poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work

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Damian Robinson 12 September 2013

submit this to as many places as you can..everyone in the world needs to read this..at least twice

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<font color =fusha>Amy 29 November 2008

fantastic poem true heartfelt emotion nice :)

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Linda Winchell 28 November 2008

Welcome! Great write Sir Chris Harris! Keep it up I want to read more of your work. God Bless, Linda

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Chuck Audette 24 November 2008

I like the comparison of eyes closed with crying, dreaming and kissing. Nice job. -chuck

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*Trusting You* 23 November 2008

this is beautifully written. Some of the greatest things in life are very seldom seen, This is why we close our eyes when we kiss or cry or dreamgreat lines and they are so true. good job. Crystal

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