Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 10,594 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Green: The Color... [green Things] - Poem by Bri Edwards

My favorite colors are green and brown.
Green-leafed trees polka-dot our town.
Green’s the color of farm pond scum,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

thank goodness? for computer programs which highlight misspelled words....... though not all programs seem to agree. one program didn't like 'ain't'. this latest one was ok with ain't but not with 'ok', and it clued me in that greenstick should be green stick and new-mown should be newly mowed. well WHO is the expert? right?
i can't know it all in just 65 years.

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(Sept.2012)

Comments about Green: The Color... [green Things] by Bri Edwards

  • Bronze Star - 2,568 Points Stephen Katona (5/13/2015 5:00:00 PM)

    Awesome poem Bri. I'm green with envy I didn't write it first. I particularly like:
    a green stick fracture is “not so bad” (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 17 Points Charles Darnell (7/4/2013 8:58:00 AM)

    A funny, whimsical piece. A cross between Dr Seuss and Gerard Manley Hopkins (at least the first couple of lines) ! Enjoyed this!
    I personally find it hard to write humorous pieces, so I applaud whenever I see one done well. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,704 Points Valsa George (7/3/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem on Green! I too have heard of green thumb but not green nose.Incidentally Green happens to be my favourite colour too! I invite you to read my poem- Oh! Green, Stay Green, if you don't mind! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/2/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    Ha, good one Bri.
    This one tickles me green, or yellow, or blue, no...... (Report) Reply








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