Peter Hall

Rookie - 351 Points (Sydney, Australia.)

Greying Men's Boyhood Dreams - Poem by Peter Hall

I went down to the local show
Where I could smell the steam
Of antique engines & tractors
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Comments about Greying Men's Boyhood Dreams by Peter Hall

  • Rookie Ruth Jefferson (8/1/2013 2:07:00 PM)

    Hey. I just wanted to let you know that I like this poem. I like the way you take something ordinary and everyday and then use it to call forth thought in the reader. Just one thing, I would have liked to see a little more detail because I feel as though I'm taking a journey with you and then there appear to be some places where you jump from one idea to the next. Thank you so much for putting yourself and your writing out here for me to see. Happy writing :) (Report) Reply

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