Grimacing Rain Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Grimacing Rain

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It was raining and raining for hours nonstop
nobody knows when to go back,
As if it was grimacing in silence like dark night
It may take time to talk again, for a while.

Night may break in to day, hours into minutes
but those silence may not shredded to rain of tears
And that hours of rain was the tears of silence
that rippled into voice of grimacing - protracted.

If I asked to reason out curves of silence
It may cajole to suggest inkling of love provoking-
For the tears fallen in rain, of thosa unbeaten songs
lest silence may censure grimacing.

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as a child i always thought 'when angels cry, it rains' so tears in your poem tuk me bk to those childhood memory of mine... tht reminded me of my thought of tears.... lovely.......i love rains.........

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 25 June 2007

I love poems about rain...10 from me. I enjoyed it so much. This poem reminded me of one of my own... Rain The rain pitter patters Your name Falling like tears On everything! Sincerely, Dorothy

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Raghavan Warrier 10 December 2006

Excellent poem. The imagery is strong and beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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