Carrol Hoffman

Rookie (10/18/92 / fort.smith arkansas)

Growing Old Together - Poem by Carrol Hoffman

the day we first met
i didnt think you liked me
i was so unsure of myself
the day i fianly asked you out
you said you had been waiting for me to ask you
a year later we were standing at the altar
we both said i do
9 months later we're in a delivary room
it's a girl
i got to cut the cord
now we have 4 kids
2 boys
2 girls
they're 24,28,32,34
they're all happy
we're so happy
we're retired
we're so glad we're going to be together till we die
we're growing old together

Comments about Growing Old Together by Carrol Hoffman

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/16/2008 10:11:00 AM)

    a nice rendition of an everlasting love.well write rose! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Aden orie (5/9/2008 1:22:00 PM)

    wow thats a great poem is it actually true? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 9, 2008

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