Eyan Desir (caribbean)

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.. > *My first cut****(dark

Like a virgin to love
I felt a miracle for the first time
As your presence touched my life
You gave my heart joy it never had
And opened my eyes to a new light
Not knowing love isn't just a pretty face
But what that's lock in a heart
I fell as the victim to a lie
False promise of sweet love
Streams of pain! I now bleed
Many years my heart wasn't red.




thanks for reading

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire.
June 26th 2009

Eyan Desir
Submitted: Wednesday, July 01, 2009
Edited: Monday, January 02, 2012

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  • ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (7/28/2010 8:19:00 PM)

    this is... undescribable. it really made me think. i'm kinda speechless.
    love, Heart of Ice

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  • Nooruddeen MM (10/3/2009 2:17:00 AM)

    Nice one
    Touching

    Rgds
    Nooruddeen

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  • Maia Padua (7/20/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    touching....
    first cut of the heart..
    first love...first heartbreak...
    nicely written, my friend..

    lovelots,
    Maia

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  • Leslie Alexis (Heaven is My Home) (7/18/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    see......... sorry. but, life eh? ? choose virtue.....

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  • Stefan Van Pinxteren (7/7/2009 6:49:00 PM)

    Very good poem I understood it right away. I think I reaily felt what you wrote.

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  • Hannah Martin (7/5/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    I really like that! It's a bit complicated for me to read since I'm young, but once I read it a few times I get what it all is saying.
    Please stop by, and read some of mine if you find time.

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  • Appleblossoms 2009 (7/5/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    knowing love isn't just a pretty face....good line.

    Entitled - First cut then you start with Like a virgin to love -made me curious as what your poem is all about....which i may say a good ingredient in a poem.

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/4/2009 10:18:00 AM)

    great expressions indeed.. Eyen.. you said it well.. what better man to talk of bleeding heart than you.. nice 10++
    with lots of love
    shan

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  • Broken Heart (7/4/2009 8:28:00 AM)

    vry nyc poem! !
    i really lyked it! !
    plx read my poemz to if u hve time n plx cmmnt on them to so i knw u lyked them or nt plz!

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  • Luwi Habte (7/4/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    you oredy told... complicated
    but sweet and nice at all
    well done doctor
    luwi

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