Guitar Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

melodic and poetic expression....Vipins sing it well with guitar hahaha like it..write more_Unwritten Soul

This poem is extraordinary! 'Her love is like a bevy of stars' Beautiful lines my friend. :)

I'm swept away...a very gentle melody, perhaps played in keys C, F, and G. Maybe an Aminor. Yes, very beautiful...

YOUR LOVE FOR HER IS BEING SHOWN BEAUTIFULLY ON LINES SHE WILL APPRECIATE THE WORDS YOU USED ARE SO EXACT FOR EACH EMOTION THAT YOU WANT TO SAY

as sweet as a melody, like a cool breeze in a sunny day! ! ! ! ! ! well done. (kalakki)

Nice, for a second i thought i was singing a chorus in a song, nice one brother.

Second/further rearrangement of words can bring better clarity.Keep your cute in light instead of fog, please.

These the remarkable lines of the poem which pulled the string at my heart made me mute as feeling in heart spoke. You are a star in the romantic poetry....... 'Her love is like a bevy of stars, Hovering in my heart skies, ' Your poem guitar is like listening to guitar - a mind soothing experience. Most of the poets nowadays are writing poems on love and direct romance but yet glance your poetry special are you producing magnificent poet with your magnanimity. Thumps up to the poet!