Gypsy Girl Poem by Lyn Paul

Gypsy Girl

Rating: 5.0


Her beauty
Shone
Like the moon
Like diamonds

She ran from love
Ran from her flesh
That kindness of flesh
Who understood every feeling

Wings of power
Lets
Gypsy Girl roam
Roam to the unknown
Fear deep inside only

Smiles hide her fear
Fear exploding in her nurturer
The gentle Gypsy
She know the love is there
But she just keeps running

Such fear
Building
No one is listening to her heart
It is the nurturer
Who can feel her heart
Exploding

Her door is locked
I cannot get in
I can see
Wings of power
Laughing with her
But they need to hear
Her heart crying

Gypsy Girl
I am here
Always
Hiding no honesty

My heart is raw
My sleep
A rollercoaster
I am knocking
I fear

Gypsy Girl
You shine so bright
You light up a room
Let your heart take you

I am always here
Get off that train
May they listen....
They need to



Copyright Reserved January 12th 2016
Lyn Paul

Monday, January 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety,hope,love,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2016

Like diamond moon her beauty shines. Her wings of power are so amazingly laugh with imagery drawn here. Lighting up the room with this power and beauty is interesting.10

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Kelly Kurt 12 January 2016

Written like a free spirit with an open heart

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 January 2016

You get the impression of something true in life's movement.

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Tony Karas 12 January 2016

(((HUG))) Poor gypsy girl. A beautiful, moving write.

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Jak Black 16 January 2016

An interesting read, Lyn. Does the nurterer (parent?) feel a sense of guilt/angst because of her daughter's insecurity, anguish, reticence. I pray this is not a true reflection of your own mother/daughter circumstance.

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2017

a year ago i read and commented. i really don't care for it. let me grab another! bri :)

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Christopher Tye 27 March 2017

Wonderful poem, we all want to be able to feel truly free but we rarely are.

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Annette Aitken 30 August 2016

very interesting read..you can feel the up's and down's as you read.. Annette

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 August 2016

Beautiful yet painful write. Still many lives may be hidden like Gypsy girl's life. Loved reading from beginning till end.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2016

Roam to the unknown! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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