Haiku 1 Poem by David Wood

Haiku 1

Rating: 4.8


It was the mighty
Oak that hid the birds from the
Hungry village cats.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Nature is all about kill or be killed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 12 June 2013

wonderful Haiku, and it is true and meaningful, good. Please read my new poems and comment.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 June 2013

Now you turn to Haiku's. nice observation from nature.

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Yasmin Khan 12 June 2013

Oak is a symbol of shelter. You've used it beautifully in the haiku.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2021

A beautiful haiku dear poet. Liked it.........5 stars

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Ken E Hall 24 July 2013

Good poem to let cat owners know that they have an innate will to kill birds...regards

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 June 2013

FROM SONNETS TO HAIKUS- -VERY GOOD!

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Wahab Abdul 13 June 2013

nice one with terrific image

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Farah Ilyas 12 June 2013

Thrilling like hide & seek game...good one

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