Haiku Poem by Brittany Gorski

Haiku

Rating: 5.0


The warm sun is out
Shining on the pretty red leaves
a body well hidden

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Short and sad but substantive.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

A perfect haiku, horrible though........10/10.

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

Still, a gruesome scene with knowledge. Better to have the blessings of ignorance. GW62

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