Haiku #22 Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Haiku #22

Rating: 5.0


stones echo
in the bell tower's shadow:
sunset Angelus

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 14 June 2009

The bold image of the first line gives way to the spiritual stirrings of the second line. The soft whisperings of sibilance; 'Angelus echoes on stones', compliment the 'shadow' beautifully. A visual and emotional journey in just two lines - pure genius! S :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 June 2009

Nicely observed and beautifully crafted.

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