Haiku 23 Poem by David Wood

Haiku 23

Rating: 5.0


The red kite soared high
Over the wild countryside
Looking for rodents.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 July 2013

that's excellent duality, great write

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Jenie Franksay 10 July 2013

dual meaning. i love this one. checkout my poem ''jojo my brother. i hope you will like it.

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Heather Wilkins 10 July 2013

a good haiku. thoughtful

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R.j. Wynn 12 July 2013

I like it for a while and I can get into it

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Chandra Thiagarajan 11 July 2013

A meaning ful write, DAVID!

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Shahzia Batool 11 July 2013

the red kite sets the vision to search for the rodents, don't get deceived by its soaring high...it will dive and dodge any moment! ! !

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Dave Walker 11 July 2013

A great poem, in the field next to where I live you can see the Sparrowhawks going for the field mice.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 July 2013

Very nice - you fly a kite and kite flies. Thank you.

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