Haiku 3 Poem by Sean Williams

Haiku 3



Summer faded fast
Everlasting autumn passed
Into long winter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lesley Merrin 01 April 2010

this poem made me feel sad as if there is some underlying meaning to fast fading summer. A true poet Sean who can evoke these feelings in readers with just a few words. Can't wait for your next.

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Kim Davies 30 March 2010

This is quite lovely just as it is, yet I feel there is so much more bubbling under the surface - potential to extend this into a longer poem me thinks? ; -)

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Kim Davies 30 March 2010

This is quite lovely just as it is but I can feel all kind of things bubbling under the surface - potential for a longer poem me thinks? ; -)

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