Summer faded fast
Everlasting autumn passed
Into long winter
This is quite lovely just as it is, yet I feel there is so much more bubbling under the surface - potential to extend this into a longer poem me thinks? ; -)
This is quite lovely just as it is but I can feel all kind of things bubbling under the surface - potential for a longer poem me thinks? ; -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem made me feel sad as if there is some underlying meaning to fast fading summer. A true poet Sean who can evoke these feelings in readers with just a few words. Can't wait for your next.