Haiku 39 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Haiku 39

Rating: 5.0


Chilled Winter morning
Pale quarter moon wanes above
Mars and Jupiter

Tuesday, January 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
January 12th I watched the quarter moon around 5.30 morning. Mars and Jupiter shining close together underneath and two of the Galilean moon above were clearly visible to my eyes. A rare beautiful view.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2018

I watched the twelveth January's sky and got quarter moon with wonderful scene. Dear madam, you have nicely inscribed the scenery advance in a small poem which is more interesting'. Thanks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2018

Your poetic sense has rightly captured a sparkling view! ..... rich poetic imagination....Galilean moon above were clearly visible to your eyes..an elegant poem! Thanks for sharing!

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Akhtar Jawad 17 January 2018

It's really wonderful to watch the sky, a beautiful Haiku.

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