Haiku 7 Poem by Sathya Narayana

Haiku 7

Rating: 5.0


with sweet mangos
hawker on hot streets
sour life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 10 June 2009

Very apt haiku for today...10

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Indira Renganathan 10 June 2009

Revelation of a true life....sweet

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Priyanka Bhowmick 10 June 2009

good 1...a perfect haiku while drinking my mango shake :)

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Rory Hudson 10 June 2009

Nice one, especially how you use the last line.

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Catrina Heart 10 June 2009

The golden half heart of nature...lovely haiku written nice to have a mango juice!

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Pia Andersson 10 October 2009

clever and ironic..there is something special with haikus...forces the thoughts to moove in a different direction i think..

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 July 2009

meaningful haiku very ironic sourness of of life on different walks of life.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Queeny Gona 18 June 2009

Less words embeded with deep meaning

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Vaibhav Pandey 15 June 2009

a great irony in this haiku sir.....very well thought out...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 June 2009

Nicely captured

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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