Haiku Poem by Sonny Rainshine

Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Rouged jewel casket,
compartments filled with rubies:
ripe pomegranates.



(Note: the optional pronunciation of four syllables instead of three for pomegranate is used here)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 01 June 2008

Very good description Sonny, I personally do not like all those pips. Exciting moments in a world that stimulates, imaginings and dreams. Bob

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