Haiku - Eel Twists And Twists Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Haiku - Eel Twists And Twists



eel
twists, twists, twists
on a straight line

fishing -
the lucky man gets
The unlucky fish

his lips the same
shade as her lipstick
after the strong kiss

adulterated pleasure
mixing grade A rice with B
for the price of A

Morning tea
An overeager fly dips into it
Then waves its legs at me

below the waterfall
her tresses becomes a waterfall
over her bodice

stubbing his cigarette
lecturer goes to teach students
about harmful smoking

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

These are all wonderful! Love number three!

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john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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