(haiku In Free Form) Peril Of Vanity Poem by Alice Cuenca

(haiku In Free Form) Peril Of Vanity

Rating: 5.0


sunbathing for hours-
her shadow shifts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mifael Llauderes 05 November 2008

that's eternity in two lines... and says a lot too.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 October 2008

'her shadow shifts' fine indeed.........10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

An amazing two lines haiku! 10+

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Ric Bastasa 13 September 2008

oi, napatik na ang imong balak sa KABISDAK.. congrats..

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Kesav Easwaran 27 July 2008

the towel...yes...shifted... good 'ku'

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