Haiku - Midday Poem by Mary Mc Creath

Haiku - Midday



green leaves
gleam in midday sun
phone rings

Monday, September 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written for a course on Haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Jayaraman 13 October 2015

While we especially us the dreamy ones would love to immerse ourselves in nature watching all the time, there is no getting away from modern world with all its intruding but at times useful appliances.. thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2015

how carefully you watch the green lives shining in the midday sun. very nice poem. thank you it asks me to watch the nature. that is your message i received from your poem

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Mary Mc Creath

Mary Mc Creath

Glasgow, Scotland
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