(haiku) Seven Sins - Pride Poem by K. Jared Hosein

(haiku) Seven Sins - Pride

Rating: 5.0


I hold my head high
Because I like looking at
My gorgeous halo.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 03 November 2007

Your poem sharpens the definition of pride and then has it fall on its own sword. Your Haikus show the hard word you have done to compress excellent thoughts into a tight space.

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K. Jared Hosein

K. Jared Hosein

Trinidad and Tobago, West Indies.
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