Haiku. Streams (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George
Haiku. Streams (5-7-5)
Fair dancing maidens
With jingling silver anklets
Rushing down the slopes
Looks like a gushing stream has taken over the form of an heavenly muse to mesmerize the entire valley where it flows. A touch of our great poet Kalidasa. Thanks.
Your comment has made my haiku more beautiful! Thank you Rajnish sir!
I can hear the anklets against the babbling of the stream Thanks Valsa-10
Brilliant Haiku on stream is amazingly shared with beautiful graphic. Thanks for sharing.
Quite beautiful Valsa slap one more syllable into L3 and perfect great picture
It was an inadvertent error. Now only I noticed it.... I actually meant 'Rushing down the slopes'.'The' was unfortunately left out. Thanks for pointing it out! I will edit it now itself!
Nicely painted. Enjoyed with photo provided.Thanks for sharing.
I can feel the lovely maidens walking as the stream flows.
to put all of nature in three sentences and feel it - that is beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 6:40:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Nice picture painted with this haiku, great imagery yet again.