Haiku...That Sinking Feeling Jealousy...Edit Poem by Ken e Hall

Haiku...That Sinking Feeling Jealousy...Edit

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Shipwrecks Filled with young
Lovers broken hearts always
Sank in Jealous Seas
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 18 July 2013

Lorraine Colon(7/17/2013 4: 28: 00 PM) So clever. I enjoyed this very much.

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2013

& Lyda & (16/7/2013) This is so true to the jealous feeling. Oh dear I am human he ha he. Nice Haiku... :) Thanks for sharing!

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful Haiku..Jealousy leaves no place for love...

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Yasmin Khan 11 August 2013

Brief and metaphorical, jealousy like a sea rages raves to drown Love.

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Ramesh Rai 28 July 2013

brilliant write sir full of wisdom regards

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Heather Wilkins 27 July 2013

nice haiku Ken jealousy has no place with love.

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David Wood 23 July 2013

Nice one Ken, I invite you to read my haiku's when you have time.

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