Haiku189 Poem by Ari Alsio

Haiku189

Rating: 5.0


the old oak could
be to the old oak smell
and squirrel climbed

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 28 October 2015

A clear image of the squirrel climbing the oak tree! Nice Haiku!

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Ari Alsio 28 October 2015

Thank you ;)

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 October 2015

This is absolutely beautiful! I very much enjoyed reading it.

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Ari Alsio 21 October 2015

Thank you my dear friend somewhere out there in the world of poetry.

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M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Good ne, Nice humour. I liked it.

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Ari Alsio 17 October 2015

Thanks M.A.N, thanks man.

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