Haikus (The Women) Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Haikus (The Women)

Rating: 4.7


The green paddy fields,
In the hearts of eves
Are divine secrets.

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In the fields of saffron,
The laboring women
How pale and consumptive look.

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Why does the decaying belle
Bring a garland
Needling fresh flowers?

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In the dreadful jungle of the night,
A frail, thin line of the light
Or smiles of jet black women.

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On the sand of the shore,
Basking in the sun
There are dreamy and drowsy belles.


(1986, Translated from Urdu into English by Dr.M.Q. Khan, India)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick A. Martin 07 October 2009

they are all beautifully descriptive. Each one its own unique piece of art.10

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Mamta Agarwal 08 October 2009

i can see a haiku moment in all. you have captured women from different perspectives- beauty, mystery, ageing, frolicking. Naseer each is a gem. there is sense of wonder, sadness, admiration- your inner eye didn't miss anything. please post some more. i notice you don't follow traditional 5,7,5 syllables. THanks Mamta

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Raj Nandy 08 October 2009

VERY INSPIRING HAIKUS! THANKS FOR SHARING! -Raj

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 October 2009

Well composed. Nice style of imaginary.

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Sahar Sahar 08 October 2009

Poems Projecting the rights of woman, her important role in the society........

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Sandra Martyres 10 October 2009

Highly imaginative pieces Naseer...liked them all.10

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Louis Rams 09 October 2009

each one is a story in itself. gr8888t write a ten

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I like the differences between all these women and once again they are so imaginative and creative haikus. Really unique too! 10 love Karin

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Kesav Easwaran 09 October 2009

women on your dreams...or is it dreams on your women? very much imaginative haiku strips...thanks...10

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Sandra Fowler 08 October 2009

Your pen praises women with subtle grace and sensitivity. Thank you for your lovely art. Warm regards, Sandra

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