Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler

Hairbrush - Poem by Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler

how i wish my fingers were the bristles
or my breath were the wind when it whistles
thru your hair, thru your hair
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Comments about Hairbrush by Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler

  • Rookie Wanda Swim Strunk (9/17/2005 1:56:00 PM)

    Kindof perv-y..which is why I like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Christine Magee (3/19/2005 4:49:00 AM)

    Very original, a wonderful rhythm and flow and altogether a very beautiful, sensual poem.
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  • Rookie - 0 Points Amberlee Carter (3/10/2005 4:26:00 PM)

    i wrote an ode to a toothbrush once....this touched on a sensual aspect, well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zoe Nyght (3/10/2005 12:52:00 AM)

    I love the movement of this piece, the rhythm and the fluidity. The repetition is perfect for this (like an echo) . It definitely makes the poem. The last two verses are my favorite, due to outstanding rhythm.
    Overall, it reminds me of Romeo and Juliet: 'O, that I were a glove upon her hand that I might touch that cheek! ' which, in my opinion, isn't really a bad thing.
    So, I can honestly say, this is the first hairbrush poem I've come across that I truly enjoy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 150 Points Poetry Hound (3/9/2005 4:17:00 PM)

    Very nice lyrical piece, Jake. Check out Li-Young Lee's 'Braiding.' It comes at it from a different angle, but you might like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Shepherd (3/9/2005 3:46:00 PM)

    Love the dancing music of your cornrows...bought your first soft babybrush yet, Jake? Very romantic. (Report) Reply

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