Half-Closed (Haiku) Poem by Vassilis Comporozos

Half-Closed (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Eyelids half closed.
Moon shedding light on shadows.
Stars ajar with dreams.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On the brink of sleeping: a blessed moment when one's free to be his/her real oneself and talk to oneself and no one else...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pheko Motaung 23 June 2012

Wonderful! Yuh's a master with words!

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Aparna Chatterjee 17 June 2012

Very Nice :) Keep Writing....

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Vincent Kuo 27 May 2012

Very elegant poem, creating a deft picture and experience of the half-asleep state! Excellent!

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