Hand In..........Hand Out Poem by trinity aana

Hand In..........Hand Out



river side go hand in hand with flowing water,
star light shine hand in hand with fireflies,
hand out to me some nector some rays, now.
hand out to me some flight some anchor, now.
my angel walk with me hand in hand, to the cliff to the equinox now..
my angel walk with me now! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hana K 15 June 2008

that's so sweet...and lovely...and.... I forgot to bring my dictionary.... I have nothing to say due the lack of vocab...

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Reinalie Jorolan 29 November 2006

great read and amazing piece.I like the stretch of your imagination my dear. Love and big hugs, rain

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Raghavan Warrier 25 November 2006

I liked this one for tis rich imagery. Excellent.

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Alison Cassidy 17 November 2006

Excellent Trinity. Fantastic shape to this one. Nicely balanced and your images continue to impress. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx

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