Hang Up Poem by Lee Degnan

Hang Up

Rating: 5.0


watch you
watching me
want you
wanting me
can't think
can't breathe
could you
deny me?
wait, no
wait for
don't know
something more?
some sign
you might
not mind
another score?
too bold
oh no
see you
gonna go
can't think
you see
rather you
f*cking me
watched you
watching me
makes me
wanna scream
can't see
you be
ever wanting
to deny me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 12 August 2007

awe! ! ! ! ! absolutely genial, i like the style, thanks

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... Lynch 06 August 2007

Cool poem, interesting style. -Kylie M. Lynch

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Roger Bowman 07 December 2006

Great story poemo Lee... All the best Roger

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Untitiled and unnamed 24 October 2006

Yeah, this is good, And it reads really well to... well done lee.

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David Gerardino 11 October 2006

great poem, , , , , , , , , i can see every word................10

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