Happenings Poem by Vijay Sai R

Happenings



Babies in mothers’ lap
Toddlers shouting lengthy lullabies
Friends cracking jokes
Girls blushing in mobile phones
Juveniles loitering here and there
Newly weds enjoying each other
Grandfathers munching old stories
Grannies busy looking after them
Students sinking in books
Vendors selling sweets and savories
Beggars begging alms
Policemen keeping vigil…
Every journey in an Indian train
Relish these and many more…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Jarboe 17 November 2011

beautiful slice of life...

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Vipins Puthooran 17 November 2011

Wow, ye portraited a wonderful moving picture by your poem, , , , the last two line is the soul of this poem, , , excellent penning! ! !

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Surya . 18 November 2011

vow! great. in few lines you have explained a whole life around us. great observation and lines.thanks for sharing. surya

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Iwrite Iam 19 November 2011

Nice...A reality turned into an experience... If one looked upon all our journeys as experiences, then life would be so much nicer..

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Mohammad Muzzammil 19 November 2011

Really nice poem that shows the essence of life that is happening around us

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Susan Lacovara 15 September 2013

Your ability to paint a picture for my own mind's eye is wonderful. Across the many miles that separate our countries, I can feel close to your visionary portrait thru your writing. Nicely done! PEACE

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 19 December 2012

Wonderful poem, Sir wonderful I like this line Students sinking in books

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Charles M Moore 18 December 2012

Enjoyable and observant read.

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Lindsay Maasdorp 30 November 2012

Enjoyed this read, kind of refreshing and easy yet interesting. Thanks for sharing Vijay.

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Ruwanal Liyanage 14 November 2012

Every human being born to this world has been destined to play a role. From birth to death, in different age capacities we all have predetermined roles to be played. As you have observed, those men and women are performing well. They have not deviated from the script (narrated by the god) . nice words. i like it. keep up the gud work.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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