Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 21,272 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Happy Birth Day - Poem by Amitava Sur

Happy birthday to you my dear
A very happy birthday to you.

The candle lights with chocolate cake,
And dangling stars with rose petals
Are ready to celebrate your lovely birth day.
The number of candles today you blew,
Are the number of years that you flew.
All the dreams you did pursue
May all of them come true with you.
Happy birthday to you my dear
A very happy birthday to you.

Sweet memories are here to stay -
With hugs, smiles and all gifts on display,
Wish you all the happiness and peace -
Be bestowed upon in the coming days.
As you wish upon a star -
May zillions of stars gaze over.
Happy birthday to you my dear
A very happy birthday to you.

Soft music playing with lights -
Makes a vibrant evening tonight.
Had I been with you today
Singing dancing with a wish to say -
Happy birthday to you my dear
A very happy birthday to you.
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Amitava

Topic(s) of this poem: birthday

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

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Amitava (3.11.2013)

Comments about Happy Birth Day by Amitava Sur

  • (4/11/2015 2:17:00 AM)


    Wish all my birthdays would have this same wish, Amitava! A beautiful melody of love you have written here in this poem. I agree with Patricia, it would make a beautiful birthday song if sung by you! You have a wonderful resonating voice, Amitava! I could listen to you recite and/or sing all day long! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham (10/31/2013 8:25:00 AM)


    Loved your birthday wishes. Reading these birthday wishes is like music to
    the ears. Too bad I can't hear you sing it aloud. That's what you call wishing
    someone all the best. Loved it.
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  • Valsa George (10/30/2013 1:55:00 AM)


    A beautiful Birthday song worthy of sending to people, celebrating their Birthdays as a Birthday wish! Great write, Amitava! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 10, 2016


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