Hiralal Patil

Rookie - 1 Points (01 JAN 1975 / Jalgaon, INDIA)

Happy Birth Day - Poem by Hiralal Patil

To you happy birth day,
And have a nice day.
If there will be Sunday or Monday,
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Comments about Happy Birth Day by Hiralal Patil

  • Silver Star - 3,844 Points Wahab Abdul (1/9/2012 6:23:00 AM)

    a very good poem indeed i like the poem..and i enjoyed it toooo.....keep it up...please read my poem, , new ones (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/24/2009 4:20:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing this happy poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Vijay Gupta (6/3/2008 11:04:00 AM)

    theme of the poem is very good.i like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gronski (6/1/2008 1:58:00 PM)

    not bad. could use some improvment though. but as for a simple birthday poem, its good. (Report) Reply








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