Kay Barcelon

Rookie (December / Manila Philippines)

Happy Birthday Doc - Poem by Kay Barcelon

Your birthday
is a worth the day
the best day ever
I slept all day
Finished a bag of chips
A liter of coke
Fell asleep
Watching a stupid movie
But I had a good day
Because it’s your birthday
The best birthday I know
I had a good rest
Woke up with my dog
On my lap asleep
I bet she enjoyed the crumbs
The empty bag of chips
Still on the floor
And another stupid movie
Going on
Heck DOC
it’s your birthday
I’m not late Am I?
Might as well enjoy
The best day I know
I hope I greeted you enough
Because now
I’m going back to bed
Get rid of the jetlag
When I wake up
I’ll say Happy Birthday DOC
a good day to have
And to say
Happy Birthday Old Man! ! !


Comments about Happy Birthday Doc by Kay Barcelon

  • Rookie poetry lover (2/9/2007 7:54:00 PM)

    I like this b-day wish, I agree with Brian dorn not typical at all but very nice & cute (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Brian Dorn (10/6/2006 5:08:00 PM)

    Not the typical birthday poem? Rather unique and different, cleverly mundane and, most importantly... special! Well Done, Kay!
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dimbie Isalazybum (10/3/2006 7:30:00 PM)

    I LOVE this poem it is outstanding and funny (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Allen Vinal (10/1/2006 4:38:00 AM)

    Perfect birthday tribute, Kay! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 30, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 30, 2010


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