Harmony? (Thought) Poem by Poet of the River

Harmony? (Thought)

Rating: 4.5


i fell to my knees,
when i felt a cool breeze.
i had close my eyes only to see,
the world turn its back on me.
the sun and moon were guiding me,
to friends and family in harmony,
but only if they could truly see,
my eyes are shut,
I'm on my knees,
and not with them in harmony.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 25 October 2011

Bittersweet captures desperation to a T, despair can create great works

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

Wonderful...very poignant write..

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California, but move around a lot.
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