Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 3 Points (Singapore)

Hasta La Vista - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

The dawn of Tigris soaks with burnt blood
Clamps every soul
Allures every moment of grilling madness
Each dropp of boiling tears
Reflect a living hell
No more sign of hungry Vultures above

Reincarnation will haunt tormentors
You can run but the ghost of you will never rest

The death arena cries and floods your sins
The sunrise of punitive horizon cracks

Till the end of Earth
The naive color of red
Will be the effigy of premature death
When the lips of the skies
Kiss the fragile ground
Until the seeing
Hasta la vista


Comments about Hasta La Vista by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/27/2009 3:09:00 PM)

    I liked your words... I touched a profound meaning

    really great! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Prasetya Utama (6/11/2009 3:34:00 AM)

    Reincarnation and sins, both of human acts who never lost after life. Nice and dept meaning poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Mccann (5/25/2009 11:35:00 AM)

    Full of emotion and violence, extremely well portrayed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abdul Karim (5/25/2009 5:35:00 AM)

    Meaningful Write, well defined, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Innocent Seilane (5/18/2009 2:41:00 AM)

    The 'Death arena cries and floods your sins' wow this poem has combined poetic technique and critical thinking, thanks for reminding me to read it i really liked it 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (5/14/2009 10:05:00 PM)

    Matcha! This is an unusual poem from you; which so much power and surrealistic images, ghastly enshroudment..........terrific Matcha! You can do that(love) and this too with equal dexerity. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Don Pengilly (5/14/2009 2:06:00 PM)

    Wow very thought provoking (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/14/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 5/13/2009 2: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: hi mary no sound no picture? ? ?


    The anger and the violence leap out of this poem, Sulaiman. Beautifully expressed, but please allow us a little hope!
    Mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gabi Ngubeni (5/14/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    I love the way you have used your words, strong emotions coming through. Beautiful work man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bright Rose (5/13/2009 2:39:00 PM)

    Sulaiman, honestly, WOW, very well written, absolutely awesome, loved the title, loved ypur well chosen words and your tone was sooooooooooo convincing, Brilliant and so artistic, you are truly gifted :)

    keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tshering Tobgay (5/13/2009 9:51:00 AM)

    Great, Great, Great! Bravo! bravo! nice piece, well planned and well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (5/13/2009 9:51:00 AM)

    A lovely poem to read... great art piece! ! nice job Sulaiman
    10.. Ali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/13/2009 9:32:00 AM)

    The extract from Leland's comment:



    From: The Prophet Leland Wright (Washington DC United States; Male; 16)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 5/13/2009 9: 22: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Hasta La Vista


    Love the poem i love the last part

    'When the lips of the skies
    Kiss the fragile ground
    Until the seeing
    Hasta la vista'

    That was like the icing on the cake i think i gave the poem 10/10 on the rating and since i can't i can't comment i just wanted to tell you good job on the poem and message me when you have more. And Sulaiman i know this is typical me but since you are one of my first poem hunter friends i am sure you won't mind reading one of my poems. Since it has been a while just look at some of my poems find the one or ones you like and comment. Thanks in advance (Report) Reply

  • Rookie djean Whitney (5/13/2009 9:10:00 AM)

    This is great, thanks for sharing.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (5/12/2009 3:51:00 PM)

    You are very creative in your descriptions. Vivid images and the thoughts provoke lingering thoughts about what you describe. Very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (5/12/2009 3:51:00 PM)

    You are very creative in your descriptions. Vivid images and the thoughts provoke lingering thoughts about what you describe. Very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Obinna Eruchie (5/12/2009 11:35:00 AM)

    it is a good poem on the devastating effects of destructive violence, if allowed unchecked to go on indiscriminately. the title seems to be an allusion to that catchy phrase john taught model t-800 101 in terminator 2, one of the films in the terminator film franchise about terminators and various other characters traveling through time to either kill or protect John Connor before the events of Judgment Day unfold. the picture of this poem is well captured. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Devin ~Poetrys Lost Soul~ (5/12/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    i can really realate to this piece and it is written beautifully....And it is a clear picture... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matt Shami (5/12/2009 7:46:00 AM)

    The suicide bombers alone are the living hell.............to hell with'em! ! ! Im over excited with this kind of piece.Great job bro! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Natividad Francia (5/12/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    The sadness... the bitterness in your poem is felt, the expression of cruelty in mankind is well described by your excellent choice of poetic words, Great work! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 9, 2009


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