The dawn of Tigris soaks with burnt blood
Clamps every soul
Allures every moment of grilling madness
Each dropp of boiling tears
Reflect a living hell
No more sign of hungry Vultures above
Reincarnation will haunt tormentors
You can run but the ghost of you will never rest
The death arena cries and floods your sins
The sunrise of punitive horizon cracks
Till the end of Earth
The naive color of red
Will be the effigy of premature death
When the lips of the skies
Kiss the fragile ground
Until the seeing
Hasta la vista
The extract from Leland's comment: From: The Prophet Leland Wright (Washington DC United States; Male; 16) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 5/13/2009 9: 22: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hasta La Vista Love the poem i love the last part 'When the lips of the skies Kiss the fragile ground Until the seeing Hasta la vista' That was like the icing on the cake i think i gave the poem 10/10 on the rating and since i can't i can't comment i just wanted to tell you good job on the poem and message me when you have more. And Sulaiman i know this is typical me but since you are one of my first poem hunter friends i am sure you won't mind reading one of my poems. Since it has been a while just look at some of my poems find the one or ones you like and comment. Thanks in advance
A lovely poem to read... great art piece! ! nice job Sulaiman 10.. Ali
Great, Great, Great! Bravo! bravo! nice piece, well planned and well written.
I liked your words... I touched a profound meaning really great!
Reincarnation and sins, both of human acts who never lost after life. Nice and dept meaning poem.
The 'Death arena cries and floods your sins' wow this poem has combined poetic technique and critical thinking, thanks for reminding me to read it i really liked it 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You are very creative in your descriptions. Vivid images and the thoughts provoke lingering thoughts about what you describe. Very well done.