“Haste turns into waste”
More salt in food spoils the taste
“Hurry up” brings no result
It adds salt into pinch
Understand the depth of sea
Then jump and try to see
The careless venture may cost life
Life journey is like sharp edge of knife
Keep steady behavior in business
That shall earn you honor on the face
People will call you by name and prefer
To purchase all items with nice offers
No work is impossible if pursued with skill
Only care should be taken to stay still
Little mistake may spoil the chance of success
Life has to be steady with changing phase
Nothing can be learnt over night
You have to struggle and fight
It takes long time to acquire skill
All loop holes are to be nicely filled
Make no mistake in pursuing goal
Merely dreams may not invite call
Slow and steady race may yield result
As the foundation may be strongly built
i like this THE DAILY POET4 minutes ago Very good keep sharing
“Haste turns into waste” More salt in food spoils the taste
cool Heart Blue4 minutes ago not my cup of tea, but you have good structure as well as interpretation, well done
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! about an hour ago · Unlike · 1
Hasmukh Mehta welcoem rohani daud a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
Mn. Rachel Good advice and observations; a lesson I've had to learn more than once or twice in my life! The last line says it all; a strong foundation is the most important.
Hit home a story told like a teacher J L3 minutes ago Intuitive was just for me Comment +1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's OK Matthew Thurman3 minutes ago It's OK Comment +1