David Sabo

Rookie (December 2nd,1990 / Oklahoma City)

Hatch - Poem by David Sabo

And once again, I find myself against the wind.
The way it’s always been.
I don’t mind.

Pushing through the crowds, choking on the cloud,
I dont mind

If it means I won’t be around.
When it all comes down.

All the people speaking
Their opinions and their feelings
Like they really have a reason
To be breathing

All the people lie
All the people cry
All the people die

Everything is falling
The end calling
All the people preaching
Now praying
Now crawling
falling


Comments about Hatch by David Sabo

  • Rookie Danny H (12/21/2009 6:18:00 PM)

    I adored this poem,
    it was brilliant
    the rhyming scheme and pattern.
    the moral message it was brilliant., (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie dark skies covering me in darkness (12/18/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    dude i like ur poem ur good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 24, 2009


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