clayton young

Rookie (3/10/93 / Round Rock Texas)

Hate? Love? - Poem by clayton young

Pain, Hate, Love, gone.
I say I have this hate, this unbelievable,
unconceivable, and unbearable hate,
that lashes out from in me,
and explodes in fury that I have locked
deep in a vault somewhere that must
remain locked forever.

But why? Why do I feel so much hate,
or was it love? No. it can’t be love
, who could possibly…
but wait, I love her and she loves me,
does she not? And them,
they’re there too and.. I think they love me.

As I fall into the abyss of that dark
place I see hate, and I see love,
but.. I can no longer see a difference
between the two. And that is when
I realize that I have lost everything,
that I can no longer live like this.
Stuck amidst all this hate.
or was it love?

Clayton J. young

Comments about Hate? Love? by clayton young

  • Rookie Callie Shaw (12/26/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    i like your poem. its really nice (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nathaniel Lane (5/2/2009 5:46:00 PM)

    told you it was awesome: P (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/1/2009 9:32:00 PM)

    i really like the way vocab/ideas are matched all through/ to hoist up the theme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rated GothEmoHippyRebelMe (5/1/2009 6:05:00 PM)

    I absolutely love this and ive read a few others can wd say... AWESOME! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 9, 2009

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