Hate You Poem by Twilighter dazzzler

Hate You



You gave me my name,
and it coming from your mouth triggers some kind of shame,
First you loved me
Second you waver with me
Thirdly your destroying me,

All ive got are these hazy memories of you,
because i refuse to beilieve this thing is you,
Im stringing this along,
Praying one day ill wake up and this thing will be gone,
And if you hear me
Forgive me
im starting to hate you.


(needs improved)

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Lauren Owens 12 July 2009

Twilighter Dazzzlers new account is under her name Lauren Owens

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Serenity Prayer 21 December 2008

i understand how you feel. great job. and i like the book Twilight too, but Breaking Dawn is my favorite in the series. great job though.

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R T 22 October 2008

Hate is a big lie but it is good sometimes, just for an exact period cause if you let it grow you will be the first thing it eats. Believe me if you loved someone so true, you will never hate, even if you tried.

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Heart Felt 22 October 2008

Love and hate go together don't they? ! I know exactly how you feel, thanks for putting it into words.

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