Have You Ever-1 Poem by Asif Baloch

Have You Ever-1

Rating: 5.0


Have you ever felt
Lost and alone
With people all around
And known as none
Smiling with sadness
In your eyes
Weeping blood tears
Drops inside
Echoing music puts lashes
On your soul
Tearing away all your
Last hopes
Giggles and laughs doth
Wants you to die
Forcing you to look in
Death angel eyes

Have you ever felt
Destroyed
Hoping for hope to stand
One last time
Yearning for love and to
Smile
Feeling like divested
Bier
Untouchable, unwanted
Forbidden
Left in the desert for
Vultures and stink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2008

Very much so, I wonder why In a world of Billions we still feel that feeling.. Andrew 10

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Little Hatila ;) 10 November 2008

yes, i have.... very true...we all went through these tough times but life keeps going...10 Hataw

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Iram Jamil 14 November 2008

Remarkable words.. Keep on writing.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 November 2008

good write...expressive exploding...thanks Aijaz...10

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Kite Remedy 16 November 2008

Nice meaning you put into you stanzas.. nice works..

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

that descibes me a lot.. but only inside if people would see that they would wanna run and hide like I do. this brought back memories of something that changed me. It hurt to read this... very good job. Becca

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Gargi Saha 26 November 2008

Personal feelings have been tried to universalise. Awesome write............

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Estevan Martin 18 November 2008

I can actually relate to this one... This shows great emotion..

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Emo Seb 18 November 2008

awesome. full of emotion. keep it up.

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A very strong powerful poem with amazing imagery. Thanking yu for allowing me to read it. Karin Anderson

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