Have You Ever L♥ Ved Me? Poem by ansa belle

Have You Ever L♥ Ved Me?



TO: .......................................
Always dreamt, always waited;
Just for You
Left me alone in the big world;
just me, no-one else left
My eyes sore, just from crying;
Never met you
Hadn't ever known you;
Your blue/green eyes twinkling in the sun
Never have forgotten them;
Your a thief;
You've stolen my heart
Your a good runner;
Runnin' through my mind,24/7
Never got to tell you;
How much I loved you
Don't tell me its too late
You've moved on
You made the sun shine;
In the moonlight
You told me never to say never;
I listened to you
YOU'RE too late now i have....
moved on



Love me
xx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daizha Robinson 12 May 2011

hi really feel the soulfulness you are trying to bring but i hate to say it but i really think you could do a lot better. no i am not trying to hate but i feel where you are going with this poem and i think you could add more and really get noticed! i hope you understand where i am coming from.

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