He Poem by C. P. Sharma

He

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He is unknown
Though He is omnipresent
Why do I wander! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

very wise three lines sir..puts one into deep thoughts

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The lines say it all as other poets have commented. Just why do we? Very thought provoking poem with excellent wisdom. 10 Karin Anderson

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Mamta Agarwal 21 July 2009

paradox- though we can see Him in everything, yet we wander. Restlessness brought out beautifully. Mamta

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Nikunj Sharma 22 July 2009

he is the bridge from known to unknown he is the path that you have been shown he is he and me is me can someday me be he

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Catrina Heart 22 July 2009

A nice senryu written in profoundness............this should all be our question why we all wander when HE is there always omnipresent to our lives!

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Ruth Walters 19 August 2009

If you didn't wonder you wouldn't be human......always inquisitive, curious.....another good poem Ruthy

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Irene Clark-hogg 30 July 2009

Another interesting statement. Do children not learn more when allowed to make their own mistakes? Kindest Regards, Irene

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Ivor Hogg 28 July 2009

succinct but accurate

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Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009

indeed...but surely in time one realizes every path leads to the same place....

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Sandra Fowler 27 July 2009

I like the Scripture that says: 'Be still and know that I am God.'. Profound write. Warm regards, Sandra

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