He - God Poem by Dhanesh (trying to be) poet

He - God

Rating: 5.0


When I was child, I called Him DevBappa
Then came to know His many names to call.
His stories always fantasized and inspired all,
well, God's stature is ever growing tall.

He makes me shielded when I bow down,
Always have a feel to accede to His crown,
in His grandness and immensity... I love to drown,
He makes genuineness in every persona spawn.

I see Him everywhere in adorations,
see Him in my Papa as inspirations,
see Him in my Mumy as Love & admirations,
see Him in my Sis as adorable compassion,
see Him in my Bro in his aggresive directions,
see Him in my friends as fence for fortifications.

He is the secure feeling that I get
in His holy court,
gives feeling of belongingness with everyone
in His Worldly fort.
He can make straight that is distort,
He gives home to all deport,
With Him, even silence can become forte,
if you remorse then He forgives all tort.

Though I even feel Him in the air that surround,
to wirte this much about Him hard I found,
His vastness is so enchantedly spellbound,
m jus too small to write about Him who is so profound.

He makes the beautiful even beautiful.

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Dhanesh Aradhye
(02 Mar 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 02 March 2009

how true................. superb poem on the almighty

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Cherry Sha 02 March 2009

In short you find him everywhere and in everybody... Lovely write. Admired.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 April 2009

God is everywhere...in you in me in all things in all those we see...a good concept in well composed lines...10

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Mandar Madhav 02 March 2009

Nice one add sm more stanzas on particular god names(Ganesha, Shiva / Shri Ram) etc if u can imagine it will be endless poem

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Vinod Kumar 02 March 2009

good dedicated poem yar, actually Fear and feel of the almighty is the only way of total satisfaction of life, Rakesh sharma who is the first indian space waker, his first message was included a request of to offer a holy coconut to lord Ganesh, Yes the question is were is the god Rakesh realised it is just ahead his head, thanks a lot,10++

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Neha Aradhye 02 March 2009

vow...so GODLY...nice one yaar! ! ! so u did it finally, huh! ! Great...just Great

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Fiona Davidson 02 March 2009

The ever present god...great write Dhanesh 10++

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