He's The One... Poem by Neha Aradhye

He's The One...

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Me Myself & I...
am amicable...

A person whuz impeccablebut nt crummy.....
I have quagmire definitions wandering inside my head about the person i'm gonna live my whole life......

In search of a person whuz ingenuous...
Someone whuz conscientious....
The one whus gonna b the protagonist of my life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

who will embellish d scent of life to me,
who will cement d courage in me,
who will fade d melancholy residin in me,
who will mollify all d emotions in me,
who will erase d opprobrious pieces of me,
who will coruscate d being inside of me,

who will consolidate me wen i am in oodles of unsurpassable dysphoria...

Waiting for that someone, for that CELESTIAL PERSONALITY.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amit Gokhale 09 June 2008

Am surprized by the poem, the kind of depth you got in the writting is amazing, Tuzi vocab prachand vadhali aahe, ani tula mahitey aata ki tya vocab chi aani tuzya feelings chi sangad kashi ghalayachi. Mala ekch gosht sangavishi vatate, 'You got the passion to express, as well as you got tremendos honesty to portray the right picture of your feelings. -Hats off.. Amty Da....

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 03 December 2008

wow thats really a superb piece....wow what a thought of the one of your life.......nice one dear.keep writing

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

Sure Neha! Your prince would love you and make u so so so happy. well done.

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Pallvi Sharma 16 October 2008

well done..u are surely talking abt many people's mind :)

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, aryaindia 22 August 2008

You have very beautiful thoughts and the concept is very good but you must restrain yourself from using short forms like whuz, nt etc. Just a suggestion, arya

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anurag duggal 09 June 2008

His this is on nice peom keep on the good work :))

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